THIS. I was guilty of commenting on the latter but not the former. Not sure how much was down to when I read them, but at least some of my reason for not posting to the first one was probably because I didn't feel I could offer you useful reading. I know nothing about the context, though, from what you later say, it might be useful having a naive reader to test drive it? I suspect though that I might find it difficult to follow. I certainly can't understand computer games. My mind tends to run on simpler plot lines these days. I notice much tv drama is written in a convoluted style that I find hard to understand and confusing. Either I'm getting old or things really were much simpler 20 years ago. Probably both. Still I could have recognised your achievement and applauded you for it. May I do so belatedly now? Well done!
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Date: 2012-12-02 09:52 pm (UTC)